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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #2038474
A teenage girl inherits her father's unfortunate condition.
This choice: Patty asks if the girls have a doll box to return you to the toy store!  •  Go Back...
Chapter #3

Patty's Worst Prank Yet

    by: Derpus Author IconMail Icon
originally by superdude9

Sam and Lucy thunder into view, until they are finally standing mere inches from your body. They haven’t noticed you yet, and are staring at Patty, who begins to talk to the two of them.


“Hey girls!” Patty exclaims. “I have a special mission for the two of you today.”


“What is it Patty?” The twins cry in unison.


“I brought this old doll from my house today, and I was wondering if you had a spare doll box, so that I could return the doll to the store.” Patty points to the floor, and the two girls look down at you.


“That dolly looks like Jill!” Sam noted.


“It does, but it isn’t.” Patty assured her. “It’s just a stupid little doll.”


“I’ll got get a box Patty!” Lucy added, and she ran upstairs to go get an empty box. Sam followed her to help her. When they were out of sight, Patty bent down and whispered to you.


“Let’s see you survive this one little Jill doll.” She snickered. You could do nothing but stare at her as the spray had completely frozen you. In this state, you would even feel like a doll. To add insult to injury, Patty shifts your look of terror into a pleasant smile, and your face freezes that way.


A minute later, the twins return, and they set the box down. It is a box just long enough to fit you, but also incredibly narrow and tight from the right and left and the top. Sam picks you up and stuffs you into the box, positioning you so that you are staring out at the three giantesses. Lucy closes the lid of the box, which is partially see-through, allowing you to see out and people to look in and see you. Patty tapes the box shut, sealing you in, and then sets you upright on the table.


“Awesome job girls! Now who wants a cookie?” Patty smiles.


“We do! We do!” The girls cheer, and the three of them run off into the kitchen, and disappear from sight.


You couldn’t believe what was happening right now. How could Patty do something like this to you? Sure, she had pulled countless pranks before, but nothing on this level! Surely it was a joke, and she would free you later that day, right?


Five exhausting hours later, and Patty finally reappears. She gathers up her belongings, including you, says goodbye to the girls, and heads out. Instead of walking home, she makes a different turn, and begins to head to the toy store only a few blocks away.


After a few minutes, Patty reaches the toy store, and she walks inside. She sets you down on the counter, and addresses the saleswoman.


“Excuse me ma’am, but I would like to see if you wanted this doll.” Patty lied. “I no longer have need for it, and maybe you might want it.”


“Well of course!” The saleswoman, an eighteen year old girl named Elizabeth, said. “Any donations are welcome!” She peers into your case, and eyes you up. “That certainly is an attractive doll. She’s quite curvy, wouldn’t you say? And that smile is mesmerizing! She’s simply so lifelike.”


“Yep!” Patty admits. “She was always my favorite plaything, but I’m just too old for dolls now.”


“Of course. I understand.” Elizabeth nods. She picks up your box, and puts you under her arm. “Thanks again, and have a good day!” Elizabeth begins walking away with you.


“You have a good day too!” Patty calls as she turns to leave. You catch her eye one last time before she leaves, and she waves cheerfully to you. You wished you could break free and strangle her, but you just can’t do anything at all.
Elizabeth sets you down on an empty space surrounding by other dolls, and slaps a ten dollar price tag on the box. Before walking away, she looks at you one last time.


“You…are just such a cute little doll!” She giggles, and then walks out of sight. You want her to notice you are a real person, but the sad truth is that you just don’t look real at all at the current moment. You are confined to staring out of your cage, perpetually staring.


A full day of torture later, and someone finally comes over and picks up your box, ready to but you, but who is it?

You have the following choices:

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1. Your mother, Mary!

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2. The saleswoman, Elizabeth!

3. A complete stranger!

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