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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #2032255
Good Belly Expansion is hard to come by. This Succubus will change that.
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Chapter #5

Snowy Succubus

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"GET OUT OF MY WAY, BEFORE I BEND YOUR SPINE LIKE A SLINKEY!"

That was something common you'd hear with Antala. She had the worst temper of any succubus. The tiniest things could send her into a blind rage. Like today. She had gone shopping in the monster world, and couldn't go one minute without exploding in rage.

She finally left the store and was walking down the street. Even just walking down the street, she was seething. Anything could cause a total meltdown with her.

And unfortunately, something did.

Suddenly, Antala was knocked to the ground, causing all of her stuff to fall out of the bags. Her eye now twitching in anger, she looked to see who knocked her down.

The culprit was a Yuki-Onna, who was rubbing her head. She had long blue hair, grey eyes, and ice blue skin. She was also incredibly fat, probably about 600 pounds.

"I'm so sorry, miss." The Yuki-Onna said. "I didn't-"

"WATCH WHERE YOU'RE GOING, YOU F**KING WHALE!" Antala yelled. "WHAT?! YOU IN A HURRY TO CRAM MORE FOOD INTO THAT GAPING MAW OF YOURS?!"

The Yuki-Onna frowned. "I- I-" She stammered.

"YOU F**KING PIG! ALL MY STUFF IS BROKEN NOW! THANKS A LOT, FATASS!" Antala continued screaming. She then got up, picked up what she could, and stomped off.

The Yuki-Onna was close to crying. "You mean succubus." She said to herself. "I can't help my weight. I can't lose it. Well, if you're going to be so mean, you might as well be punished for it. Every time you get angry, snow that never melts will fill your belly. And a snowstorm will follow."

Having said her curse, the Yuki-Onna got up and walked off, sniffling.

Now, where is Antala going?

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