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The youngest in a family learns that she has a talent for hypnotism, and puts it to use.
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Chapter #3

Stay with Zach

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I wanted to have some fun with him. Let's give him the first order.
"Take me to my room."
"Yes, my Queen." He stood up from his chair and came closer to me. He took me in his arms and walked to my room. He placed me carefully on my bed. He looked at me, waiting to see my reaction.
"Bow." He got down on his knees, his face just inches from my feet. "Apologize for disrespecting me. Beg for my forgiveness."
"My Queen, forgive me. Forgive me for wronging you, disrespecting you, fighting with you, shouting at you. I didn't know my place before but now I do. My place is below you. It always was. Forgive me my pride that led me to think I was ever equal to you. You are the Queen. No one can disrespect you. So I beg you, my Queen, forgive your unworthy brother. Let me still serve you."
I didn't answer. If he wants my approval, he would have to earn it. I thought of a way he could prove himself. I had an idea. I opened my mouth and said "Come...

You have the following choices:

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1. and take my bag. We're going to school."

2. and lay down."

*Noteb*
3. and wash me."

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