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Naruto's life is one of misery... watch as he is abused.
This choice: Yes and he murders all those women easily and leaves Kohona  •  Go Back...
Chapter #5

Revenge of the 'Demon brat' and the escape

    by: Hollowichigo2nd Author IconMail Icon
Naruto felt his own oriignally suppressed hatred at his horrid treatment quickly rising and swelling up as he had his head down. His blue eyes flashed a crimson red with slit pupil. A faint orange chakra was beginning to swirl around his young body. His nails sharpened and elongated as did his teeth becoming razor sharp fangs.

The civilian women were too busy pondering what to do and weren't chakra senstivie meaning they could neither see nor sense he was tapping into the very power that made them hate him in the first place and that was a very fatal mistake on their end one they wouldn't live to regret. The shinobi would be too late to save them.


Inside Naruto's body, a certain nine-tailed bijuu opened her own red slit eyes as she laid down in a damp cage feeling him take some of her chakra around 4 tails of it. Kurami was excited she knew her host had been hiding his hatred for a while now and it seems now he could no longer hold it back now he would be showing them why they feared her so much. She could sense he was subconsciosuly willingly drawing on her charka without even realizing it himself. This pleased the Bijuu Queen greatly at her host subconsciously using her power to make those who hurt and tormented him pay with more than likely their very lives.


Kyuubi aka Kurami smirked evilly showing massive razor sharp fangs that would easily crush a human body into paste. 'Well well, it seems little Naruto is subconsciously tapping into my power, I knew those ignorant fools would be my ticket to corrupting this child sooner or later! Kushina you and your foolish hokage husband have just signed your village's death warrant! Your son is willingly using my power! Her evil laugh echoed around the mindscape as she allowed Naruto more access to her chakra.

The civilian women were now frozen in horror seeing a fox shaped cloak of red chakra around Naruto's body with one tail but with two others already growing in.

Naruto glared at the group of the women with hatred easily rivaling Kurami's own as he threw back his head and unleashed a massive roar. The 4th tail began to grow in, his skin peeling off revealing blood underneath as the chakra grew in power and density.

the Sandaime Hokage Sarutobi and several other shinobi sensed the feamilair evil growing chakra and rushed as quick as they could to the scene but would be too late to make a difference. Sarutobi's age slowed him down greatly.

The civilian woman were shaking as they see Naruto was encased in a black orb of chakra whcih then expnaded greatly cratering the ground and destroying nearby trees and buildings. What they saw would haunt them even in death.

A mini-nine-tails stood before them with four tails swaying with a jagged glowing mouth and white glowing eyes. It gave an evil sneer before roaring loudly sending shockwaves throughout the area. The berserk Naruto than attacked rushing at the leader of the group Amia and grabbed her with his hands and began squeezing her as she screamed in agony ,the chakra burning her skin and the pressure was crushing her internal organs.

Several of the other women all forgone their plan not to attack and charged Naruto with the intent to kill. Too bad they were no match for him in his present state now. Naruto made a clone of his upper body emerge out of him facing them and slashed the charging woman cutting them all in half as they died with looks of horror on their faces.

Amia was horrified seeing all her friends killed in an instant. "I knew we should've just killed you demon fox!"


Naruto looked at her with an evil look not even caring of her accusations due to being possessed by Kurami's will and her chakra. He then brutally tore Amia in half, her blood and organs spilling onto the ground like ground meat.

Amia with tears felt her life quickly slipping away and then died right there with a look of horror forever on her face.

Naruto roared in victory at killing them and then ran off into the trees soon jumping over the village walls escaping from the place that had pushed him to become this. He was now free and would likely cause major destruction in his current state.

Sarutobi and his group had arrived just in time to see Naruto in the version 2 form escape the village after discovering the murdered and ripped in half women group. Sarutobi felt tears flowing reazling it was all his fault for not better controlling his villagers. 'Minato…Kushina forgvie me…I'm so sorry I failed you on every turn…! I failed to honor your dying wish and failed to take care of Naruto-kun…now he is on the loose and under the control of the Kyuubi…I fear for everyone now.'




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