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Finn finds himself in a alternate land of Ooo where everyone is fat and evil.
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Chapter #5

Finn is not successful and passes out

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It was practically impossible to find the keys in her flab. Lifting up just one of her fatty folds took a lot of strength to hold up and when he let go they clamped down on his arm and made a wet squelch that splattered her sweat around him. Marceline's belly would ripple and the movement would cause the keys to shift. If it wasn't for her sweat greasing up his arm the only way he could free his hand would be to cut it off. Whenever he received a mouthful of fat he would try to bite on it hoping that it would hurt her and make the vampire stand up but apparently it just made her giggle. "Oh Finn, that's cute but I'm the one who bites you remember?" He could taste the salty perspiration on his tongue as he nearly choked on her sweat. He was finding it harder and harder to breathe as he tried to reach the keys. He would get close but they would slip out of his sweat soaked hands.

"No...." He sighed as he finally went limp and passed out. Marceline noticed that he stopped struggling and figured he had either submitted or that he passed out. She raised her belly and found out it was the latter, not that she cared. Just before he passed out, she whispered, "When you wake up, we're gonna have some belly filling fun."

When Finn woke up, he was woozy and could still taste the sweat in his mouth. He tried to rub his weary eyes when he noticed that he couldn't move. When his eyes adjusted he discovered his hands and feet were chained together. Not only that but he was mortified to find that he wasn't wearing any clothes and that his hair was dripping wet. He could only assume that Marceline used it as a towel while he was passed out. There was one thing he noticed that really made him worry about the "belly filling fun" that Marceline mentioned.
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