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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #1947262

A story about a notebook which changes reality whenever you write "What if..."

This choice: What if Dan was Francesca the maid?  •  Go Back...
Chapter #5

Dan is Francesca

    by: Unknown
“Oh, Dan here – let me prove to you it's real,” Susan says impatiently.

With you still holding the notebook, she grabs it with one hand and with the other quickly scribbles out something at the bottom of the page.

It reads: “What if Dan was Francesca the maid?”

“What? Why did you write zees, madamoiselle Zoozen?” you ask.

But the words all come out wrong. Suddenly you've got a thick, French accent. And your voice is breathy, high-pitched, and feminine. And why did you call Susan “madamoiselle”?

“Mon Dieu!” you exclaim. “What ees happening?”

“Look down and see for yourself!” Susan answers with an evil grin.

You're now dressed in the uniform of Francesca the maid. A pair of impossibly large breasts pushes up from beneath the stiff fabric of your black and white maid's uniform.

“S'il vous plaît – change me back!” you beg of Madamoiselle Susan.

Susan just giggles at you again, much like the immature eleven-year old little sister she's been insisting to you that she used to be.

Then, from the next room you hear a chillingly familiar voice call out: “Francesca, where are you?”

“No!” you say with a soft, feminine gasp. “Monsieur Dan ees calling me!”

“I guess the real Francesca is now in your old body!” laughs Susan. “But now, she thinks she's really you, because she wasn't touching the notebook when I wrote the wish.”

“Change me back!” you plead with Susan.

What does she do?

You have the following choices:

1. She starts writing something new in the notebook.

2. She says, "Let me think about it for a few days!"

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