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Beautiful Mackenzie gets locked out naked, and things go downhill from there.
This choice: Rachel slams the door, but not before taking Mackenzie's book out of spite.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Rachel slams the door, but not before taking Ma...

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Mackenzie is starting to think this was a horrible idea, and asks "So....are you going to help me?"

Rachel looks her up and down one more time, gives Mackenzie an evil smirk and before she can react, Rachel snags the book..the only thing giving her any cover out of Mackenzie's hands and slams the door the click of the lock confirms she is still locked out naked only now someone has seen her, and she has nothing at all to cover herself with, she panicked and started to bang on the door

"Please Rachel, I just need the key, and maybe some clothes to put on for the walk across the street, this isn't funny"

She sees Rachel at the window laughing hysterically with a camera in her hand, she took a couple of photos and then threatened to call the police if Mackenzie didn't get off her property.. Mackenzie gives in and turns around covering herself as best as she can in the front leaving her backside completely exposed and runs across the street, back into her backyard and starts to rethink her options now that Rachel has made it clear they aren't friends anymore, then she starts to panic how many people had glanced out their windows and seen her outside of Rachel's house, Is she going to show anyone those pictures? Did anyone else take pictures? Wasn't it funny a few years ago when Rachel got pantsed on the beach by a former High School nerd...oops that one didn't really matter right now she thought, although she couldn't help but smile when she thought of it.

So now she had to decide where to go all over again does she go to her nearest neighbor to try to get some clothes before she goes to Marianne's? Or should she go as she is and take her chances that no one else will see her...was that a giggle, did someone just giggle at her? she looked around scared that someone else had just discovered her predicament she saw no one, but knew what she had to to...

You have the following choices:

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1. Go next door and try to get some clothes before going to Marianne's

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2. Risk it and run for Marianne's place

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