Chapter #7Digestion. by: Estee   Welcome back, todays chapter will be all about digestion. All food eventually lands in the stomach to be digested, so will the ponies that are vored. Let's look at some ways you can go about this process, here comes Pinkie Pie with the two meals she prepared last time and over there is this chapters predator, Big Macintosh. Say Big Mac, are you excited about todays meal?
"Eeyup." Applejack looked at her brother in disbelieve, she wanted to say something but the apple in her mouth prevented her from doing so. Rainbow Dash also wanted to protest but Pinkie put the apple back into the pegasus mouth.
Alright Big Mac, eat up, start with whoever you want.
The large red stallion eyes his squirming sister with hungry eyes. Desperately she tried to wriggle her way out of these binds but before she could even get off of the plate the hungry maw of her brother engulfed her. With Pinkies help it didn't take long until Applejack disappeared down her brothers throat.
Now, one way to go about this is to only imply digestion. Here we will stay outside of the stomach while Applejack is being digested.
Big Macintoshs belly swayed as his sister struggled inside, soon his stomach started to gurgle and churn. After a minute Applejack stopped struggling and Big Macintoshs belly started to shrink down again.
Thank you, if the writer wishes he can also have the predator fall asleep and wake up after digestion is complete. Those who dislike character death can also have the predator only store his prey for later release. Now it's time for the next one.
Rainbow Dash also desperately tried to escape as Big Macintosh approached her. Pinkie Pie picked up the plate and shoved her friend down the stallions throat, he was delighted at the chocolate covered pegasus. In the end she too was curled up in Big Macintoshs stomach.
Alright everyone, this time we'll cover an inside view of the digestion process. Depending on preference you can have the character melt into a nutritional sludge or have the stomach acids dissolve her, with Rainbow Dash we will look at melting.
For some reason the inside of the stomach was illuminated. Rainbow Dash couldn't see any trace of Applejack inside. Then she noticed that she started dripping and felt really soft and jiggly. Fearfully she watched as her body slowly turned into some sort of thick liquid. By the time she got out of the ropes her hooves were already a puddle. In the end Rainbow Dash gave up and waited until she was completely liquefied. All that was left of her was a colorful puddle that was being absorbed by her predator.
Thank you Big Mac, for the last part... oh wait we're out of prey.
"Oh, wait, pick me!" Squealed Pinkie Pie, eagerly waving her arms.
Alright why not, Big Macintosh, your next meal.
Again Big Macintosh had no difficulty as the pink pony practically dove into his throat. With one jump her upper body was already in his esophagus and a combination of swallows and wriggles helped to get the rest of Pinkie into the large stallions stomach in a matter of seconds.
Alright everyone, here we are at the final part of digestion, dissolving in acids. You may wonder why I approve of hard vore and digestion but ask you to keep the gore down, the answer: you can do a lot with implications. Let's see how we can digest Pinkie Pie without gore but with implications.
Pinkie Pie laid down in Big Macintoshs stomach as the gastric juices started to fill the chamber. Pinkie giggled as it started to tickle while she could feel her mane and fur falling out. The tickling turned into an itch, covering her entire body as the stomach acids started to work on the skin. A burning sensation spread across her body as her frame slowly shrank down until nothing was left.
That is just one example of using implications for a digestion scene, but I am only asking you to keep it down, if you really want to write gore I won't delete it but please leave an alternate option for everyone else. Gore is only strictly forbidden when the prey is a foal. Otherwise I am pretty open about fetishes, shouldn't throw rocks while sitting in a glass house so you can write many varying scenarios, just leave a little warning when you implement other fetishes like for example post vore scat or watersports. If you want to implement an OC pony then only as prey please, unless it is a non pony like for example a dragon, snake or carnivorous plant.
Big Macintosh was about to leave as a large gryphon landed right behind him.
Remember Big Macintosh, a predator can always end up as prey. Then the author can either end the story or shift the focus to the new predator.
Big Macintosh gulped as he saw the gryphon, Gilda lick her beak eagerly. With a desperate look he addresses the audience. "Help me out here please, we had so much fun in this chapter, wouldn't it be ungrateful to turn me into a meal?"
"Don't listen to him." Said Gilda. "You guys want variety right? So let's switch things up a bit."
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