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In this story you go into the bathroom to be stopped by a woman. (Its better then that)
This choice: She hears you.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #3

She hears you.

    by: Closet Fetishist Author IconMail Icon
The shadow of the woman's head remains above as she squints downward at you.

"Oh my god! What are you doing down there!?" She sounds angry.

"I...nothing, I came down here for the bathroom and I'm stuck."

The woman's face remains darkened and hidden, "I can't believe it! I'm going to tell all the girls but first..."

The woman's ass returns to cover the hole.

Her voice becomes muffled but clear enough to understand, "Sniff this toilet boy!"

She grunts and drops a ten second, earth-shattering fart into the toilet well and when the smell hit me, god was it awful; strong and potent for having traveled down to me.

PPPPPPPPPRRRRRRPPPPP!

She ripped another as I choked on the first; my eyes watered involuntarily and I watched her rise up again and look down at me.

I was preoccupied, I could barely comprehend her words as I struggled to find fresh air in this hell of gas, "You think that's bad, just wait until later." And she shut the lid.


It stayed quiet for a long time, then I heard laughs approaching; it was dark now, the full-moon was out and lit the area fairly well.

The lid above opened again and flashlights beamed down.

"Oh my God! She wasn't kidding, look at that little shithead!"

"Please, help me;" I weakly pleaded.

"Help you?! My boy, you're here to help us, not vice versa." I heard the snapping of elastic before an ass quickly covered the hole above.

"Smell my eggy farts slave!"

BBBRRRRRROOOOOOOUUUMMPPPTTTTTT!

Her fart echoed grossly through the stone walls, carrying with it the rancid rotten egg fart that had produced it. It invaded my nostrils like a parasite and hung there, burning the scent and the memory into me.

"Uh oh, I think...I might have the runs."

Semi-solid shit pours into the chamber like soft serve and you scream, trying hard to avoid the release. Once it hits you, the force knocks you off your feet and your pounded to the ground, forced to gargle through your teeth liquid shit as you try to rise to your feet but find your efforts futile.

"Mmmmmm, that's pretty good, anyone else ready?"

You have the following choices:

*Noteb*
1. Another woman takes a turn.

2. Two go at once.

*Noteb*
3. Reader's choice.

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