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Read the story of a tickling-obsessed young man during his summer break.
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The woman insisted on applying the sun screen o...

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“Sure, we’ll try some,” I told the woman.

“Come lie down here,” she instructed Leslie and me, gesturing towards a table near hers. “I will put the sunscreen on you.”

“We can get it on,” I stated, still a little suspicious about the yellow eyes.

“I will put the sunscreen on you,” she insisted. “I want to see the satisfaction in your faces when it is put on. Please lie down now.”

Although I was still somewhat reluctant, I obeyed the woman and lied down on the table. Leslie followed me, and I could tell that she was also wondering what was going on. Once we were on the table, the woman opened one of the bottles of sunscreen. She put some on her hand and started rubbing it vigorously over Leslie’s bare belly. “HEHEHE,” my cousin giggled. “IHIHIT TIHIHICKLEHES!” Undeterred, the woman kept scrubbing the sunscreen on Leslie’s stomach for about a minute before moving on to her neck. Leslie’s giggling died down to just occasional giggles as the sunscreen was applied to her skin. After she got the neck, the woman began rubbing the Cosqui 75 on Leslie’s arms and legs, which did not tickle at all. She then instructed Leslie to turn over as she put the sunscreen on her back.

By the time the woman was finished applying the Cosqui 75 to my cousin, she had used up about a quarter of the bottle. She took the bottle with her and walked over to my side of the table, and then she started to rub it over my midriff. Soon enough, I felt that the way the sunscreen was being applied did tickle quite a bit, and I fell into fits of giggles. “HEHEHE!” I laughed. “NAHAHAT THEHERE!” Just as she had done with Leslie, the woman ignored my complaints and kept going, even getting a little bit of the sunscreen in my bellybutton. She soon finished with my ticklish tummy and moved on to my neck, arms, legs, and back, none of which tickled very much. Once I was covered in Cosqui 75, the woman spoke up again.

“Please lie on your backs again,” the strange woman announced. We both got on our backs, and then the woman’s hands shot to our abdomens and began tickling us again. Unprepared for more tickling, we both broke out in laughter for the minute that she wiggled her fingers on our bare bellies. The woman then decided to stop tickling us and handed Leslie the remainder of the sunscreen. “Thank you for trying out Cosqui 75. Have a nice day at the beach.” After this, the saleswoman headed back over to her own table, leaving us to ourselves.

Looking at my cousin, we both shrugged our shoulders and got up from the table. “Let’s find a place to sunbathe,” Leslie suggested. I quickly agreed to this, and we headed out onto the beach, finding an isolated area with a good view of the ocean and plenty of sun to go around. Within a few minutes, we had put our towels down and were relaxing as the sun came down on us. Just as I was beginning to fall asleep…

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1. I felt a tickling sensation on my stomach

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2. The woman came back to us

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3. Something supernatural happened

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