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A transformation adventure designed to make new wives out of any available material.
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Chapter #5

An Elderly, Yet Still Handsome Gentleman in his...

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When Brandon sees Mr. McMillan for the first time, he's very surprised to see that although it's obvious that he's in his late seventies, he still has a very handsome quality about him. "Yes, what is it Neville?" he asks the butler.

Neville glances over at Brandon before returning his attention to his employer. "This young man's car has broke down outside of your house and he was wondering if he could call for a tow truck." he explains.

Mr. Richard McMillan thinks about it for a moment before shaking his head. "Actually, I would be more than happy to make those arrangements for you if you'd like Mr...." he says, trailing off.

"Hamilton, Brandon Hamilton. And it's a pleasure to meet you sir, thank you for the help." he says as he extends his hand for Mr. McMillan to shake.

"Please, no need for formalities, you can call me Richard." he says as he gaze lingers on the teenager that made him feel a little bit uneasy. "I tell you what, you can stay here for as long as you need until your car is ready." he suggests.

Brandon is a bit taken aback by that offer. "That's very nice of you Richard, but I don't want to intrude." he says sheepishly.

Richard holds up a hand and shakes his head. "No my boy, I completely insist. Neville, why don't you show him to his room." he requests.

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