This choice: You don't notice a thing. • Go Back...Chapter #5You don't notice a thing. by: Barlen   You look down and see what your foot had bumped into: the bathroom rug, all scrunched up by your careless brother... as usual.
You roll your eyes and roll it out again with your feet, then push it back into place in front of the shower. Then you undress as per usual, ending with your panties last. As pull your panties down and step out of them, you mentally note that something feels weird about the act, but are not able to put your finger on just what was weird about it until you are about to step into the shower and realize: it still feels like your underwear is on, it's cloth pressed up against your womanhood!
You frown and reach down to pull whatever is stuck to you off but... when your hands reach between your legs and pat around you feel nothing! It's not there! You start to frantically grope for your missing private parts, but only feel smooth skin, and your pubes further up. In a panic, you turn around and look into the full body mirror stuck to the back of the bathroom door, which only confirms your fears! Nothing! Right bellow your pubic hair is a small smooth mound that goes back between your legs, making your crotch look like that of a barbie doll (a barbie doll with a beaver, but still, a barbie doll)
You nearly scream as you rub your eyes amd step towards the mirror, inadvertently kicking your panties... and somehow feeling it from their end! You look down at them, and catch a glimpse of something flesh colored, the same tint as your own, and your mind instantly jumps from nearly loosing it, to quickly realizing that you some how left your privates in your panties!
You immediately reach down and snatch them up, and once more you can feel yourself doing it from their end, and this time you realize that it feels like you are touching your own pussy. The final confirmation comes when you pull the lump out. Sure enough, it's the wayward part of yourself. You poke it a few times, and yes, you can still feel your vulva, despite the fact that it is no longer attached to the rest of you.
Actually, that's not true... It is still attached to you, when you finger yourself, your finger ends up going as deep as you've always been able to get them since you started pleasuring yourself after puberty. Your fingers all but disappear from an onlookers perspective, sinking further into your detached entrance, but not coming out the other end of your inch thick, pancake-ish, axe wound-ish sex organ. However, you can feel your fingers deep inside yourself... and as weird as it is, it feels just as good as it always has.
So... while the outer part of your sex is indeed "detached", it's still connected to you somehow, evident by your (now portable) hole. At the realization that your pussy has not suddenly died and rotted off, but is only detached, yet still alive and linked to you, you relax somewhat... There's still a nervous pit in your stomach because you still don't know if it works right!
To find out, you hold it over the toilet carefully, and at a loss of what else to do, try to pee normally. To your surprise your stream exits your private as it always has... well, mostly as it always has. Peeing with the part of you the piss comes out of off of the rest of you is a first for you... and probably for a first for anything living here on earth for that matter. But weirdness aside, things work just like they always have... meaning that whatever happened to you isn't harmful... or doesn't appear to be harmful yet.
As you take a moment to rinse yourself off, a question pops into your head: "Will it go back on?"  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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