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Chapter #8

It better be good unlike her other ideas

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"Dango, Dango, Dango, Great Dango Family!" Nagisa chanted.

"Man, after today, how do you keep so happy?" Tomoya asked.

"Because, mom has been working hard all day to make a new product for the bakery. She texted me a little bit ago saying she finally got it."

"I hope her baking improved with it. I don't think I can take any more of Sanae's bread."

Tomoya and Nagisa arrived at Nagisa's family bakery and entered casually.

"Mom, dad, we're home from school!" Nagisa called.

"There's muly little girl! I see you brought him back as well." Akio said.

"Hi sweety, please tell me how it tastes." Sanae said.

Sanae was holding a tray full of bread of different colors. They were all designed to look like Dangos. Nagisa picked up a blue one and ate it. Nagisa's eyes lit up and told Sanae that it is the best thing she ever made. She ate a couple more of them and told her to put them out.

"Glad to hear Nagisa. Wanna try one Tomoya?" Sanae asked.

"No, no, I want you to sell them." Tomoya said.

Sanae put them on the shelf and priced them. Tomoya and Nagisa went up stairs and got their homework done for tomorrow. While Tomoya was relaxing and Nagisa working away on dinner, Tomoya heard Nagisa drop the wooden spoon she was using. Tamoya looked into the kitchen and Nagisa turned around to look at him. Her face was completely blue and it was slowly working down jer neck. She stepped out of the kitchen and Tomoya sat her down. He got Akio and Sanae and they rushed up to she's their daughter had just turned completely blue. Her hair was still red and her clothes were untouched by her color change but they were soon going to be put to the test.

"My pasteries!" Sanae said.

She rushed downstairs and pulled them off the shelf. Fortunately Nagisa was the only one that ate any and no one bought any. They think that it is the reason that Nagisa is blue. Sanae stayed with Nagisa as Tomoya and Akio worked in the bakery. They figured that they should get Nagisa checked on tomorrow and keep that pastry off the shelves.

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1. Nagisa goes to the doctor

2. She starts swelling up

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