This choice: Naruto has to clean his apartment immediately • Go Back...Chapter #6Naruto has to clean his apartment immediately by: Ares25   "Clean this place now!" She ordered with a harsh voice and pointed him with her finger. "Now! Do you hear me!?"
Naruto was startled, to say at least how she commanded him like that. "H-hinata, what's wrong, you don't seem your-"
"Don't talk back to me, you pig!" She snapped angrily and stood right front of him. She glarding down on with such a fierce look, that Naruto felt suddenly very small. "You think I could even breath in a filth like this!? Clean this place up, NOW!!"
Naruto sprung on his feet, but still somehow he felt very powerless agaisnt those powerful eyes. "Y-yes Hina-"
"Don't call me that, you pig! Pigs like you dont deserve to call the princess of Hyuga clan by their first name! Just do as you're told, you filthy swine and fast!"
Naruto lowered his head, like a scared puppy that might wet himself any second now, before quickly starting to run around his apartment, trying to clean it up fast as possible, not wanting to be yelled like that again.
But before he could really get started, Hinata snaped another command: "Clean me a place to sit! Somewhere where I can watch you work, so I know you're not just slack off in this pigsty!"
Naruto already had his hands full with the things he was carrying, when he remembered that he had a jutsu made exactly for this! He let go of the things and formed a seal when Hinata snapped yet another command: "Just what you think you're doing!?"
Looking confused, Naruto tried to explain: "I-I... I... I-it would be faster if I could... use my... Kage Bushin..."
"No way!" She yelled and suddenly came across the room, activated her Byakugan and before Naruto really understood what she was upto, she quickly sealed off all his tenketsu points, slamming unprepared Naruto to the floor. "There!" She cleaned some sweat of her forehead with her hand while looking down on Naruto with a commanding look."Incase youre wondering, that's a new jutsu my genius sister. Hanabi developed, which seals off all the chakra and it can be cancelled only by the one who casted it. In this case me."
"Bu-bu-bu-but... wh-why woul- would you..." Naruto stammered shocked that Hinata would actually do something like this to him.
"Bu-bu-bu-bu-but what?" She imitade his voice, finding it seriously pathetic how he sounded exactly like she did years ago and she was sersiouly starting to doubt her decision to let this guy to take her virginity. "Why I did what I did? Cause I want you to clean this place top to bottom withtout any chakra! Like a pig you are! So get moving!"
Naruto looked up to Hinata with scared eyes, suddenly feeling completely exposed and powerless.  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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