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A girl who ends up naked either by her own forgetfulness or by her two playful roommates
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Chapter #5

The key card doesn't work

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Sun makes it to the 20th floor and makes a mad dash to her room, but the door would not open. She swipes the key card over and over again. She tried going slower and faster, but nothing worked.

(Sun) Are you kidding me! This stupid thing won’t work! Now I have to go all the way back down to get another key card. At least I chose to do this so late otherwise half of the hotel would have seen my naked ass.

Sun runs back to the elevator and hits the down button. It goes down a few floors then stops.

(Sun) Oh crap! Is someone calling the elevator? Great that’s just my luck I’m naked and trapped on an elevator.

The doors open to reveal a girl a couple of years younger than her wearing a bikini with a towel draped over her shoulders. Sun covers up the best she can.

Bikini Girl: Oh, hi there.

Sun: Hi.

They stand in an awkward silence for a minute when Bikini Girl spoke up.

Bikini Girl: Did you know you’re naked?

Sun: Yes, I am aware.

Bikini Girl: Why are you naked?

Sun: I got locked out of my room. I had a towel, but…

Bikini Girl: Jen took it.

Sun: How did you…

Bikini Girl: Because she did the same thing to me. I came back from a concert and forgot my key card and I had to give her my skirt. I had taken my panties off at the concert and threw them on stage so after I gave her my skirt I was naked from the waist down. Then I went all the way to my room only to discover that the card would not work. It turns out that she "forgot" to activate it. She must have done the same to you…Would you like my tow…

Sun: Oh yes please!

Bikini Girl hands her the towel and she wraps it around herself. Bikini extends her hand.

Bikini Girl: My name is June.

Sun: Nice to meet you June. I’m Sun.

When she shakes her hand the towel falls down. She quickly puts it on again. June giggles a little.

June: You just can’t seem to keep a towel on.

Sun blushes.

Sun: Apparently not. So to change the subject, why are you wearing a bikini?

June: Oh I’m going for a swim in the pool.

Sun: But it’s after midnight.

June: The pool is open 24/7 and besides no one is in the pool at this time of night. Would you like to join me?

Sun: That sounds like a lovely idea, but as you can see I don’t have a swimsuit.

June: Who says you need a swimsuit to swim? I’m sure you have gone skinny dipping before. I might be tempted to partake in such an activity if you know what I mean.

You have the following choices:

1. "Sure, a little swim sounds like fun."

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2. "Sorry, but I really need to get back in my room."

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