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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #1801541

Monica’s grades slip, so her mother comes up with a humiliating way to get her to improve.

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Chapter #5

She says yes, but wants something in return

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Monica's first class was a nightmare. Everyone spent the whole time shamelessly ogling her and even her teacher, a creepy old man with a mustache kept on leering. If that was what a single class was like, imagine an entire day! Imagine an entire week! She had to get her grades up, and fast.

She met Charlene for the first time after class. Charlene was a bit shorter than she was and wore glasses, but she had great curves that Monica could see even through the baggy clothes she wore. How did the short girls always get the best curves? It just wasn't fair.

"So you're the naked girl Kendall wants me to help," she said.

"The one and only. So can you tutor me? I'm pretty desperate."

"Well, yes, I can, but it won't be free you know."

"How much?" Monica had some money saved up for emergencies, and this definitely qualified.

"I wasn't thinking about money," she said. "I was referring to an exchange of services. I help you with something that I'm good at, and you help me with something that you're good at."

"Oh. Okay. What did you have in mind?"

Charlene hesitated and dropped her cool, intellectual facade. "I...I need a boyfriend. My whole life, I've never been asked out once."

"And you think that I can help you with that?"

"Sure. You're great at attracting guys. You have five guys filming you right now."

Monica glanced over her shoulder and saw half the chess team with their camera phones out. There had to be something illegal about that. "Oh. That's just because I'm not wearing any clothes."

"So you're saying that if I stopped wearing clothes, guys would notice me?"

An idea popped into her head. It wasn't the most charitable thought, but it could work. "Exactly," she said. "You may have heard that guys go for girls who have a great personality or a sense of humor, but that's nonsense. What guys really like in a woman is someone willing to drop her panties."

"Really?"

"Really. In fact, if you like, we can try it out. Take off your clothes."

"What? Right now?" Charlene asked.

"Sure. There's no time like the present, and if I can be here naked, you can too."

Charlene blushed, then slid off her shirt, her shoes, her pants, and finally her undergarments. She giggled. "I can't believe I'm doing this."

"I'm sure you'll get used to it," Monica said, taking the bundle of clothes. "Now I'll just hold on to these for you, and at the end of the day I'll give them back and you can tell me how it went."

Charlene giggled, walked away, and giggled some more before disappearing into the crowed. Monica then took Charlene's clothes and put them on her own body. They didn't fit perfectly, but they were infinitely better than nothing. She went to her next class as though nothing had happened.

At the end of the day, she met up with Charlene who had a wide smile on her face and was still naked. "That was amazing!" she said. "I never knew that public nudity could be such a turn on! And guess what? Three guys asked me out today! Three!"

"Wow, that's great!" Monica said.

"Yeah, I might never wear clothes to school again!"

Monica paused. "Actually, do you know what? The one thing that guys like more than seeing a girl naked, is seeing her get naked, so here's what we'll do. You'll come to school like you always do, and then you'll take your clothes off in front of everyone. I'll hold them for you, and I'll give them back at the end of the day."

"Deal."

Every day afterwards worked out like that. Monica came to school and went home naked, like her mother made her, but Charlene was the one who stayed naked. Eventually Charlene got a steady boyfriend and started wearing clothes again, but by then Monica had gotten her grades up thanks to her tutoring. Monica's horrible punishment had ended without her actually going through with it for a single day, and her mother was none the wiser.
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