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What's it like as predator, instead of prey?

This choice: Oh no....so sorry, Kate, I wasn't strong enough.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #8

You lose, Kate is now a cookie.

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You continue to pull Kate, but Susan got and idea. She lurches forwards sending you flying backwards and gulps Kate up quickly. You scramble to your feet just in time to see her legs disapear into Susans mouth. With only Kate's toes wriggling Susan looks at you for a second before running.

Determined not to lose your best friend to your little sisters gullet you chase after her. Susan is fast and quickly makes her way to the bathroom and slams the door in your face. You try to open it but she has locked it. You know where the key is however and run for it.

Inside Susan sits down on the toilet, panting, Kates toes still in her mouth. They wiggle a little bit before Susan nonchalantly swallows, forcing Kate into a fetal positon in her gullet. Kate struggles for a few minutes when there is a noise at the door.

You make your way back to the bathroom door, key in hand, and hope you are not too late. You unlock the door and swing it open, to your sister running at it to shut it. You run in just as she slams the door, locking it quickly out of habit. Susan stares up at you and as she opens her mouth she lets out a huge belch in your face, before returning to the toilet to sit.

You walk up to her, knowing that the quickly shrinking form in Susan's tummy was Kate, and sit down. You put a hand on her belly and start to rub. "I'm so sorry Kate, I wasn't quick enough to save you." You say. Almost on cue, Susan's belly gurgles and starts to digest. "MMMM, that was the best cookie I've ever had! Thanks sis!" Susan say to you.

The both of you sit there staring at susan's belly for the next hour, watching it make quick work of Kate. Soon you both watch as the small bulge that is left starts to move lower and lower in to her body.

"umm. I need to use the potty sis." Susan says.
"Go right ahead, I'm not stopping you." You respond.

You have the following choices:

1. Susan takes a dump with you watching.

2. Susan tells you to leave, then eats you.

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