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What's it like as predator, instead of prey?
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Chapter #4

Surprising Reaction

    by: manubestofplus Author IconMail Icon
*an addition by: dlenner*

Kate sees the conflicted look on your face.

"Awww, don't tell me you've changed your mind?" she playfully pouts.

"No, it's not that," you say to her, without elaborating.

"Then what? I don't just look good enough to eat?"

Kate just said the secret word. You decide to come clean with her.

"That's just it! I'm looking at you and the only thing I can think about is what you'd feel like sliding down my throat."

Kate looks at you in stunned silence.

"Ok, that wasn't the response I was expecting... What the hell are you talking about?" she asks.

"Just watch," you tell her. Then you open your mouth wide. Extremely wide... wide enough for her to fit her head inside without touching the sides of your mouth. Kate must be thinking the same thing, since with an exclamation of "COOL!" she scrambles over the bed and sticks her head in your mouth, like a daring lion tamer.

"Whuff eh ehh rrr eehh ooooee?!" you ask around her in surprise.

"Just taking a quick look inside ya!" she says playfully. "Hello! *hello!* *hello!*" she calls into the back of your mouth, making her own echo. Giggling, she pulls back and you shut your mouth.

"So, uh..." you stammer, "That just didn't freak you out?"

Kate grins, "That's a neat trick, but not any more weird than the guy on TV that swallows the pool balls. Too bad the rest of you isn't as stretchy as your mouth, otherwise we could have some fun..."

You stare at her in wondrous disbelief. "And if I was?"

"Well..." she says...
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