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Rated: GC · Interactive · Fantasy · #1784234
Young Dan Gregory was given a special power, will he use it for good, or evil?
This choice: Dan needs some deodorant  •  Go Back...
Chapter #3

Benny Deodorant

    by: Jack Grey Author IconMail Icon
Ben screamed as loud as he could as he felt Dan's once thin and weak fingers no encircle him and lift him up with remarkable ease. Locking the stall Dan grinned eagerly down at the 3 inch tall captive and licked his lips very slowly.

"Not so tough now are you little runt". Dan said, full of smug satisfaction as he finally could get his much desired revenge on his bully.

Ben's eyes went wide as he struggled, though still fully clothed, he felt so exposed and vulnerable in the thick coiled fist of his nerdy punching bag. As he screamed he caught a whiff of something acidic and potent and looked up, nervous as he saw the half dried pit stains beneath Dan's teenage armpits.

"O...o....Oh God, don't you ever wash your clothes nerd?" he snapped, doing his best to still seem big and tough as Dan simply smirked cruelly above him.

"Well i ran out of deodorant last week, and i think i just found a new one". He said as a wicked grin grew across his still boyish face and a sense of pure dread began to fill Ben. It slowly began to dawn on him what was going on as Dan calmly removed his t shirt, revealing his pale, bare chest with barley any sign of puberty on them at all.

He slowly lifted up his arm though, revealing a handful of dark black armpit hairs, all of them dripping with fresh teenage boy sweat and Ben recoiled in horror and disgust.

"No dude close your pits, that's fucking disgusting dude". He shouted, still fighting against the fingers that so easily held him as he was lifted closer to the stinking armpit. The closer he got, the more intense the smell got as his thin nose hairs were burning as soon as he was pressed against the soft sweaty skin.

His clothes instantly turned dark as they rapidly absorbed the sweat, making Ben feel even more disgusted as the smell invaded his every sense, his eyes stung, his ears rang with the sound of Dan's alarmingly calm and steady heartbeat.

"Now lets apply my new deodorant". The booming voice came from above as Ben glanced left and right as his face was pressed against the warm salty skin of the teenage giant that held him.

You have the following choices:

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1. Obey and lick

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2. Obey and rub

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3. Refuse

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