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Magic and sci-fi transformations that go awry, sometimes for the best, often for the worst
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Chapter #6

Tom, That Old Loser Neighbor of His

    by: T.G.P Author IconMail Icon
Brad stood immobile in the open doorway, the shock of the scene playing out before was incomprehensible to him. His young beautiful wife with her leg in the air mounted by the old fat man in their bed, grinding his hips into her. Each thrust penetrated his wife with a wet slapping followed by her moaning loader and loader. He stood for what seemed like an eternity watching, his mind was completely log-jammed. The scene only changed when Tom started to pump harder and started moaning which quickly gave way to his body spasming making the fat man wobble. He slammed himself one last time into her. It hit Brad, Holy fuck he just came in Grace. That gross old fuck shot his load in my wife. That realization broke his stunned shock giving way to anger. Brad stepped forward enrage with the intention to do damage to Tom. As the old man rolled off Grace, he was really to beat the old fuck into a bloody mess. He was stopped in his tracks for a second time when he saw his wife's face, her expression was a strange mix of manic glee and vacancy. Tom seemed to notice him for the first time but for a man in his situation he didn't seem to bother at all. In fact, to Brad he sounded cheerful, Brad pried his eye's from Grace to look at him sitting nude on his bed grinning expectantly. He hadn't heard what the old man said, his mind was still processing the situation and the disturbing look on Grace's face. Brad looked back at Grace, she had hardly moved, even her expression was the same. Distracted he hadn't noticed Tom had stood up and crossed the floor to him. It was only then Tom had put an arm on Brad's should that he shifted focus back to him the fucker boning his wife.

"I'm glad you here Brad, I've been mean to talk to you and let you in on the situation" Tom was so casual that he might have been talking to him on the street. Brad thought if this old fucking prick thinks he's getting out of a beating he has another thing coming. Brad did get to finish his thought let alone throw a punch. Tom lightning-fast cracked Brad across the face, one moment Brad was standing the next he was looking up at the gross naked old man. The world started to fade to black, he could pick out a few words here and there.

...big changes in store...you will like the new... need to be plumped up...nice and fat...600lbs...

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