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Rachel gets her hands on the infamous size remote
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Chapter #5

Still Shrinking!

    by: Bugmaker Author IconMail Icon
by milkbaby

Rachael watched as she slowly inched downward in front of the Asian woman. It was a slow process, but she could tell she was continually dwindling. Already, Rachael's top was feeling loose on her frame.

"What the hell is wrong with you?!" Meilin asked, dabbing her lips, making sure she wasn't bleeding. "All I wanted from you was an apology!"

"I'm sorry," Rachael replied. "It's just that I was in a hurry." She bent down to pick up the Asian girl's bike, in the hope that Meilin would ride off before she noticed Rachael was shorter than before.

"Here you go," Rachael said, handing the bike off hurriedly. She noticed the remote on the ground and rushed over to it, not knowing her skirt was practically dangling off of her hips. She took a few steps and fell flat on the ground, her hand knocking the remote a little bit further away in the process.

Meilin was about to mount her bike when she saw the other woman tumble. She sighed in annoyance and kicked the kickstand down. She figured she should help Rachael up, despite how she felt about her.

Rachael was on her knees, trying to reach for the remote, when Meilin approached. "Here, let me help you up," she said.

"Oh, no thanks," Rachael responded, "I'll be fine."

"Don't be ridiculous," Meilin said, bending down and grabbing Rachael by the arm. The two women stood up and immediately, Meilin noticed their height difference. As of right now, Rachael only reached Meilin's forehead.

'"Hey, weren't you taller before?" the Asian woman asked, noticing the loose clothing on the other woman.

"Don't be ridiculous," Rachael responded, adjusting her top. "I've always been this size."

Meilin glanced down at the ground and saw the remote shining brightly against the morning sunlight. She brushed past the shorter woman and picked the strange device up, staring at it curiously. "Why would a woman carry something like this with them?" she thought to herself.

Then, Meilin remembered their fight, especially towards the end. And how she noticed a strange glow coming from Rachael's pocket. She was beginning to put two and two together.

"What does the 'S' and 'G' stand for?" Meilin asked, pointing towards the two settings on the remote.

"Um...err..." Rachael stalled, trying to think of a believable excuse, as she continuously shrank. "Sullen and Grouchy..? It's a toy marketed to teenagers."

"Uh-huh," Meilin responded, not believing her. By this time, Rachael had stopped shrinking. She barely came up to Meilin's chin now. "So, you won't mind if I do...THIS!" She pressed the 'S' button and pointed it towards Rachael. Immediately, the woman started shrinking again, not stopping this time until she reached the middle of Meilin's breasts. Rachael was practically swimming in her clothes now.

"This thing is so cool!" Meilin said, holding the device up at her face, smiling brightly. "You're coming with me, little lady." She reached out and grabbed Rachael by the arm, dragging her along as she walked. The smaller woman tried to resist, but Meilin was too strong for her now. It was like a little child trying to resist her mother.

"Stop! Let go of me!" Rachael said, trying to pull away from Meilin. Suddenly, Meilin stopped dead in her tracks. "Stop struggling, or I'll shrink you down to the size of a Barbie doll. Do you understand?" She pointed the remote at her to emphasize her point.

Rachael complied, meekly shaking her head. "Good," Meilin responded, as the two continued to walk down the street. The Asian woman stuffed the remote in her back pocket and continued walking.

"But what about your bike?" Rachael asked.

"I can always buy a new one," Meilin replied.

Where do the two go?

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