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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #1762511
A 19 year old boy gets his hands on various items that can hypnotize people.
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Chapter #6

Whitney

    by: Xhion Author IconMail Icon
"To your room!"

Whitney had never feel so awkward before. she just slammed her door and threw herself into her bed, crying in rage. Everything was fine just a few hours before, she had cleaned up the house just to make sure to get out this night; She even had cleaned the old attic, kind of pointless except for a beauty crystal ball she found in there; she imagined that was a magic ball capable to make wishes come true like Dragon Balls so she keep it. Minutes later Erick entered her room.

"Get the fuck OUT OF HERE!!" yelled at him
"I'm sorry sis, but our parents needed to know" He had accused her whit their parents. Just in the morning Jason, the hottest guy in the school had invited her to the cinema, but since he was a little older for her, her parents became al fuzzy, and didn't let her go out, and that became worst when the "gossip boy" of Erick searched in her purse and find a couple of condoms.

"You know, they aren't mad at you, they only want to protect you"
"I don't need their protection, nor yours, now go"
"Why the most clever girls always fall for the most worst guy? You know how he is, remember a year ago when he was dating Rachel? They broke up for something, don't remember?"
"But he came back and cried for forgiveness in front of everyone, he even bought flowers, it was so romantic" Whitney took the crystal ball she had found before and starting playing whit it.

"He was cheating on her, I heard from our parents he knocked up a girl while dating Rachel you must remember how much she has hurt for that" Whitney lay still, she knew he was right but... she loved him, she had loved him for years, fantasized about being Rachel in her fancy dresses and kissed Jason and then...

"I wish you knew how do I feel Erick"
"well I don't 'cause obviously you are not thinking" Whitney was about to throw the ball at him but she stopped, Erick's eyes got caught by the ball and his body became limb, his eyes lost into the ball

"You don'tknow how much you have hurt me tonight Erick, it's over anyway the only way to get out of here now would be...

You have the following choices:

1. ...into your skin

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2. ...flying in your back

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