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A 19 year old boy gets his hands on various items that can hypnotize people.
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Chapter #8

Decides on a heavy punishment

    by: Hyral Author IconMail Icon
'If he likes my clothes so much I know exactly what to do!' Preceding cautiously at first she knew that if she tried to change him too much in one session his brain could fry, even though she was angry she didn't want to make him a vegetable. "First off how to do you feel about me."

"Your my sister, I love you..." Still in a monotone voice.

"Alright well if you love me than you would want to help me as much as possible right?"

"yes..."

"Ok, good so if you want to help me, do you also want to support me?"

"Maybe..."

She knew she would have to start forcing him. "Eric, you want to support me, as much as you can."

"I... I, yes I want to support you..."

"Good you can start by helping me with anything I ask for, will you do that for me?"

"I want to support you, I will help with anything you ask of me..."

"Now, we're getting somewhere, now does a servant love his mistress?"

"I guess maybe..."

"Eric answer with a yes or a no." She knew making the matter black and white would force him into the response she wanted.

"y... yes... a servant loves his mistress."

"And does a servant do everything that is asked of his mistress?"

"Yes..."

"Do you do everything asked of you from me and love me?"

"Yes..."

"So I am your mistress, your owner, correct?"

"I, no you are... well I suppose..."

"If you love and serve me what am I to you?"

"Your... my... mistress..."

"Good now say it again, who am I, and what am I to you?"

"You are Mistress Rachel, you are my owner..."

"Perfect." With a grin the entire time Rachel began to reinforce the suggestions made during the session. At the end she commanded that he forget entirely about the orb and he would come to her room at the same time tomorrow night for another session of hypnosis. 'This is going to be so much fun!' At that the session ended and as commanded Eric dazefully left the room and each of the siblings went to sleep.

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1. The next morning

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