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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #1762511
A 19 year old boy gets his hands on various items that can hypnotize people.
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Chapter #6

He takes a more sinister revenge.

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Eric thought carefully about what he wanted, and what he wanted was payback. He wanted Rachel to bend to his will instead of him always having to do what she demanded and be blamed for whatever happened no matter if he did it or not. With that, he began to speak.

"Rachel, from now on you will be my slave and do what I want you to do when I want you to do it. You will not tell anyone of this, and you will be happy to be my slave. Your desire will be to please me above everything else. Do you understand?"

Rachel's expression didn't change as she said, "Slave. Your wants. Not tell. Be happy. Please you. Understand."

Eric then chuckled to himself as he walked around his sister as she stood perfectly still staring straight ahead. His eyes roamed from her feet to the hair atop her head taking into account her complete, paralyzed body under his control. He felt good with this, but deep down inside, there was a part of him that prodded him to do more. He wasn't sure what more he could do, and besides he could always use it again later.

You have the following choices:

1. Let her go and consider who else to use the necklace on.

2. Add more or try the transformation capability.

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