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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #1762511
A 19 year old boy gets his hands on various items that can hypnotize people.
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Eric comes in a few minutes later looking for t...

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No more than 10 minutes later, Rachel heard a knock on her door. She was prepared for Eric to get here, she had laid the orb on her night stand and put it in front of the door so it would be the first thing he saw. "Who is it?" knowing full well it was Eric.

"It's me, have you seen a crystal ball?" As he opened the door and was presented square in the face with his item.

Rachel half laughing taunted him by saying "Look into the orb its mesmerizing!" Surprisingly to her he did look into the orb a silence came over the room as seconds clicked by. She could see him trying his best to look away from the orb, but it was too late he had already been enthralled.

Thinking he was joking with her, Rachel laughing added: "I command you to tell me what you do when you come into my room!"

In a monotone voice Eric replied "I check your diary and put on some of your clothes..." Rachel was aghast at this, half because he was far more of a pervert than she expected and half because the orb had actually worked! Quickly she checked the email that Eric had gotten on how to work the orb again. She wanted to give him a horrible punishment for being such a pervert.

You have the following choices:

1. Decides on a heavy punishment

2. Decides on a light punishment

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