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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #1750513
Ash must survived being shrunk in a cartoon world.
This choice: Chamametchi Notices something in her spoon  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Discovered

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Chamametchi opened her mouth, and slowly led the spoon into her mouth. It looked to be the end of the small creature's life, when suddenly, she stopped, and slowly pulled the spoon back. "Huh? Mametchi, what's this in my cereal?" She looked down at something that was very small. She couldn't really recognize it.. But it was something weird.

"Huh?" Mametchi walked to his sister, and glared at the strange thing. "Hmm, maybe it's a toy that came with the cereal? I don't know. Good thing that you saw it before you ate it! We wouldn't want that to happen, eh?"

Chamametchi slowly got her other hand, and picked up the small creature with only two fingers. With a grin, she examined it. "Oooooh, I wonder what this is.."


Ash stared into the huge mouth and could help but think how incredible it looked. Huge white teeth large enough to grind him to bits, a wide quivering tongue ready to taste him and a vast throat opened up to accept whatever would be left of him. He felt the spoon scrap up against the bottom teeth.

‘This is it,’ he thought. ‘I’m going to be chewed up, I’m going to be swallowed and how I’m going to look coming out the other end I don’t want to know.’

Suddenly when the spoon was halfway into the huge mouth it stopped and was pulled back out. The creature, which Ash concluded was a girl was looking down into the spoon. Looking down at him in fact.

The next thing he knew he was firmly grasped between the tips of a huge finger and apposing thumb.

“Oooooh, I wonder what this is..” he heard her say as she continued to eat her cereal. Ash’s limbs were warming up thanks to the comforting warmth given off by this what ever she was, but they were pinned between her finger and thumb. Not that he could move even if he wanted to. He was too frightened to move. Still he couldn’t help but watch in personal interest as she ate mouth full after mouth full. In fact he found himself strangely enjoying watching her eat.

She also was looking him over, no doubt wondering what he was. She had probably never seen anything like Jon in her life. He was totally at her mercy, and he wondered what she’d do next.

You have the following choices:

1. Her Brother wants to see it

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2. She takes Ash to school

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3. Plays with Ash in her room

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