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As Halloween draws near, something evil lurks in a small Texas town...
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Chapter #5

A Perfect Evening

    by: Snoogins Author IconMail Icon
(Originally authored by mbu17)

What a perfect evening thought Nicholas Ellerson.

It really could have been, he thought. A week ago, he was sure he was going to score with his girlfriend Julia, but she'd shot him down. Not only did she give him the "let's slow down, maybe just be friends for awhile" line, which by itself was enough to drive any man crazy, she then went off and cheated on him the very next day! And went all the way! What's more, all the gossip coming from her girlfriends suggested it was her first time!!

Her first time! Who cheats on their first time? Who does that? And who does it the DAY AFTER her boyfriend propositioned her???!!! and with ROBBIE FREAKIN MULLIGAN!!!

*Sigh*

"How's this Nick?"

A soft girl's voice broke his thoughts.

"Looking good Lilly, just kick your legs a bit more."

Lilly started kicking her legs somewhat awkwardly. A pretty, fair-skinned little 10-year old, she stood at about 4 feet 5 inches, with earnest blue eyes and strawberry blond hair. The nude preteen girl was just beginning to blossom, with the vaguest hint of growth in her chest, and just enough shape to her 65 pound body to catch a boy's eye, if he was paying attention. Most wouldn't notice, but Nick did.

"No, not that much. Here, see how Melanie's doing it?" he said, gesturing at the other pretty girl in the water with them.

Melanie was Lilly's twin, though they were fraternal, not identical. They were both pretty much the same in build and stature, and had the same fair skin, but Melanie's green eyes and fiery red hair betrayed a bit more of an edge.

The sisters' personalities were nicely accentuated by their appearance - Lilly was the gentler, quieter, and less certain one, and had a certain innocence about her. Melanie had a bit more of a temper than her twin, and was bolder and more mischievous as well.

Unlike some twins, the two girls embraced their physical resemblances, each wearing their curly hair in a cute ponytail. This ironically had the effect of highlighting their differences all the more, both in appearance and temperament; to their family and friends, the name "Lilly" had become synonymous with "blue eyed blonde angel", just as "Melanie" now meant "green-eyed redheaded firecracker".

Nick, for his part, had light skin as well, though a shade darker than his sisters'. Like Melanie, he had curly, blazing red hair, though his caring blue eyes resembled his other sibling's. He had almost 4 years on the twins; just last month, they'd had their 10th birthday, and his 14th was less than two weeks away. Standing more than a foot taller than them at 5 feet 6 inches, and weighing about 120 pounds, the boy was fiercely protective of his little sisters, yet warm and kind when around them.

Of late, he couldn't help notice both of them very slowly maturing into beautiful young ladies, and though he had no intention of violating their innocence, the constant exposure to their naked bodies was one of the more pleasant aspects of Nick's day. One of the perks of being a nudist, he had to admit.

He gave Lilly's shoulder and affectionate squeeze and patted her on the back, and then swam over to Melanie. "Here's how it's done, Lilly. Melanie, you mind if I hold you in the right position to show sis how it's done?

Go ahead, lover boy, I'm all yours" she giggled, turning Nick and Lilly's faces bright red.

"Oh lighten up you two, I'm only playing."

Nick relaxed, though he was sporting quite an erection. Nothing to be ashamed of, though he kept it hidden in the water. As he held Melanie's upper body in place, one arm around her torso keeping her afloat, the other hand steadying her soft yet firm little butt, he realized that maybe this was the perfect evening after all.

Unfortunately for the three of them, though, he wasn't the only one thinking that.

As you watch the boy and his adorable little sisters, you decide to...

You have the following choices:

1. Seize them right away

2. Lie in wait and watch them while you decide your plan

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