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Raven meets a stranger who says she can become a knight but will she?

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Chapter #5

What a shock

    by: Moo
As Kane watched the fight went back and forth, but the first boy still seemed to have a slight advantage. Suddenly the boy was doubled over by a swift knee to the groin. Kane winced in sympathy then laughed a deep throaty laugh. This attracted several of the boys attention and they scarpered. The only ones left were the two that had been fighting and one other, who was helping the boy with the knees to his feet. Kane dismounted and lead his horse over toward the boys. He over heard one of them say, "It's about time, I thought you were just gonna let him beat you to death then Raven." "not a chance, I'd have prefered to have won fairly rather then kicking him but he's much stronger than me." At the sound of the second voice Kane stopped, he was astounded, unless his ears decieved him that was a girl. A tough one too. He got back on his horse and started off toward the castle again. As he did she turned and he saw that this girl could grow up to be a beuty. He could see why the lad had called her Raven, her hair and eyes were the darkest hee'd ever seen.

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