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Rated: ASR · Interactive · Supernatural · #1609796
Four perfectly normal girls deal with the supernatural. Offers 100 points per addition.
This choice: Mel falls off. . . and lands inside the train, somehow.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Inside The Hell Train

    by: LanceII Author IconMail Icon
"Wow..." The train was almost glowing as she stared at it, puffing out square-shaped clouds of smoke and its engine not so much chugging as moaning. Understandably amazed, the girl leaned forward to get a better look.

Only to scream as she lost track of her balance and fell headfirst over the railing. She could her herself crying at the top of her lungs and them felt a powerfull wham as she landed.

"Oof..." In pain and dizzy, Mel stood up... And gasped in horror.

Oh, God, she was in the train. She could see the lights whizzing by the windows, lanterns illuminating the hallway a blueish white. Behind the portal to every room, there were no humans, only hard-to-distinguish black shapes...

".... Okay..." Now starting to hyperventilate, Mel began inching backward, "N-Need to find a door... Just find a-"

"Tukut!"

"AH!" Alarmed, the teenager screamed as she spun around. Now she was face-to-face with a conductor. Or what looked like a conductor... It had only black circles were its eyes should be and a smooth surface of yellow skin over its mouth. It was holding out its hand, callingly...

"Tukut!" It gurgled out, in spite of Mel not being able to see what it was speaking with in liu of a mouth.

"Y-You mean..." Worried, the girl tried to back away, "You mean, ticket?"
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