Chapter #5Yes (Her mind is gone) by: Unknown After the flash, Ash got up from his sitting position he had fallen into. He looked around and saw pikachu lying against a tree, unconscious, but unharmed. He saw the stone's glow was fading and went over to pick it up. It didn't flash like last time, maybe it had to little energy to do it again, maybe it only worked when multiple persons touched it, Ash didn't know. He then heard some low grunts and saw pikachu getting up and then stare at something. Ash looked at the same direction and saw Dawn frozen in place, arms in front of her eyes and almost in a fallen position. The slightest push would be enough to make her, yet she stood completely still.
"Dawn, what's wrong?" Ash asked. As he waited for the answer, which didn't come, he went over to her. He looked over her carefully, everything seemed to be normal except for her blank eyes, which didn't even show the least of emotion. Several minutes passed, with many Pokémon coming and passing by, all wanting to see the strangely petrified human girl. Ash had sat down next to her, pikachu at his lap, watching her during the passing minutes.
"Cut that out already Dawn!" Ash shouted as he jumped up and pushed Dawn out of her position. She just fall, not even moving anything to prevent her head from smashing onto the ground. Ash stood their amazed at her behavior.
"Stop acting like this Dawn, get up." He said, after several seconds had passed again. To his surprise she did stood up, though in a very stiff way. Ash waved his hand in front of her eyes again, as she stood completely frozen again after getting back to her feet.
"What's wrong with you?" He asked her again, or rather himself as she again showed no reaction.
"This is to weird. Alright, stay here and climb a tree for all I care, I'm leaving." Ash said as he turned around. He nodded to pikachu, but he seemed distracted by something again. So he looked back around sighing at first, but then looking in awe as he saw Dawn climb a tree. He couldn't believe it, never had he seen Dawn do something so fast and without asking and without complaining. The moment she had reached the top, she just sat there.
"Dawn, get down from there, that's dangerous." Ash said, still trying to figure out what had made her move. And as he did, she came down again. Then he had a thought, or rather a theory and he couldn't wait to test it.
"Dawn dance." Ash said when she had set foot on the ground again. And she did, though again quite stiff and with the same move over and over again. Swinging her arms a bit and turning around in a circle, was all she did for several minutes.
"How far would you go?" Ash wondered, as she just kept going.
"Dawn, let me see your panties." Ash said. He and pikachu gaped as she did as told, anyone would have been murdered already for even asking a girl to drop her skirt or pants in front of someone. But she had just done that exact thing, without the faintest sense of shame or disgust. The panties didn't interest him, the mere miracle of the act had been enough.
"Dawn, pull your skirt back up." Ash said.
Pïkachu went over to here and shocked her in an attempt to get her back to normal, but she didn't move, even when he turned strengthened the attack, didn't she flinch for a second.
"Imagine all the things I could do with her, or make her do pikachu. But that'd be wrong, she's still my friend, we should go find some help. Or should we?" Ash wondered.
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