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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Action/Adventure · #1588516
You shrink to half an inch tall in your girlfriend's apartment!
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Chapter #3

You go unnoticed

    by: Iji Author IconMail Icon
Natasha is now lying peacefully on her stomach, head turned to the side against her cozy soft pillow. The quiet little scene may seem innocent enough, but to a tiny man that has just been lapped up, its hell. You are imprisoned in a dark, damp and ferociously hot dungeon. The giant tongue that brought you into this madness lies atop of you, pinning you to the bottom floor of your girlfriend's mouth. Thinking quickly, you run along the wet floor and slide up against the inner wall of the mouth. You have to get out of here and fast. Only seconds have went by and already you are soaked in not only your own sweat by your girlfriends dripping saliva. You realize it is futile to get through her teeth and so you can only hope that her taste buds will be sensitive enough to notice you. As you climb onto her giant tongue, slipping and sliding as you go, you wonder how long you have before she will finally wake up.

As you reach the tip of the tongue, you trip and slide towards the middle. As you land, you look around (your eyes have been adjusting ever so slightly) and notice the tongue in in a bowl shape, with the sides and tip a little more elevated. You begin to jump up and down to get her attention when suddenly your feet feel funny. Standing still for a tiny second, you can feel as her taste buds absorb your flavor. It at first feels like a tickling then it turns into a sucking sensation. It itches your skin but at the same time it feels like a high powered vacuum is pull at your skin. Not hurting too horribly, but very uncomfortable. As you try to walk away, saliva starts to gather in more intense portions, dripping from the ceiling and flooding the bottom of her mouth and top of her tongue. Already now, you are knee deep in a pool while your taste triggers more spittle. Now realizing that the tongue was a bad move, you begin to run only to find out that you can't. You aren't exactly stuck but it feels like running through what you image swamp water would feel like. As your upper body attempts traveling faster than your lower will carry you, you trip and go head first into the nasty saliva. Unfortunately for you, her tongue sucks your entire body like gravity, and her taste buds are now pinching, sucking ,tickling and shocking you. Its starting to hurt, but worse than that, the suction on your face is holding you down as the acidic pools of drool cover you completely. Not only is she tasting you, but she is going to drown you in her own spit! You fight with all your might, and even as you manage to free yourself the situation only gets worse. The saliva is now shoulder high and bubbling up all around you. You half run/ half swim for your life but the suction pressure has now doubled and you go under!


Just as you think its the end, light pours in from you ahead of you. You can see it through the lake of spit, and are relieved that your loving girlfriend has finally noticed you. Then you hear it. The entire chasm fills with a deafening roar that sloshes you and the spittle, freeing you from what felt like certain agonizing death. Unforunately, the mouth closed before you even got an attempt to escape. Just as soon as it closed, it opened again and as the goddess smacks her lips, piercing echos swarm your ears and the organic cave around you. Before you even realize what is going on, the giant beast you've been riding rises to the ceiling and all the saliva in her mouth (you included) begins to swirl into decent. You scream as loud as you can but the sounds are cut off as spit pours into your mouth. This hurricane is over in just a split second as you are slid down her tongue and the ground suddenly drops below you. You travel down her throat faster than even gravity could have pulled, and for you the adventure is over before it could really even begin.

Natasha wakes up, sits up in bed and yawns. Although she usually has dry-mouth most mornings, she smacks her lips to find that she has been drooling, or rather would have been if her mouth had been open. Wrinkling her nose, she quickly swallows and goes about her business.

You were swallowed alive by your girlfriend, and she'll never even know.

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