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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Erotica · #1521457
you obtain a way to control anyone you desire
This choice: Its There  •  Go Back...
Chapter #3

poor girl

    by: 1yoyo1010 Author IconMail Icon
Normally, the piece of shit ring is there, and you figure you might as well try it on. You slide the ringer on your left ring finger, thinking about stupid marige jokes. That's when your sister jumps up behind you. You turn around startled, and see your sister laughing it up.
"Shut your trap up," you yell. Then your sister clamps down and her lips seem stuck together. She yells and screams but her lips make it seem all to muffled. She literally tries to pry her lips apart, to no avail. You, knowing your sister, think its a joke.
"Stop it!" you yell. She stops and stands like a military grunt while and officer is inspecting them. Strait and without flaw. What the hell had got in into her?
"Say something," you tell her.
"Something," she replies, with a blank and lifeless tone.
"Say, I am ugly and have no talent," you test.
"I am ugly and have no talent," she says with the same blank tone.
"Say that again only like you are ashamed of it," you tell her.
"That again," she says with a heart breaking tone.
"No, say I am ugly and have no talent like you are ashamed of it,with your head low and crying," you tell her.
"I am ugly, <sob sob sniff>, and have no, <sniff>, talent," she says like a perfect actor. She also breaks your heart. Something was wrong with her, due to the ring. You decide to test what you can do.
"Jenn, you will become perfect, your hair face and body will be wiped of all unattractive features and made to look perfect. But they will remain yours at core so you will only look like a perfect version of yourself," you say in a commanding tone. She morphs, and for the first time, you are actually some what attractide to her.

You have the following choice:

1. mess with her

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