Chapter #6Examining you in detail (Third person chapter) by: We Smile   As much as Sandra would like to enjoy a quick sugar fix before her dentist arrived, when she tasted it there was an alarming lack of sweetness in her taste buds, with the candy having the texture of a rag. -What gives?- She thought, before removing the treat from her mouth. Expecting to find a piece of wrapper attached to the side of the lollipop, she couldn't find anything weird on the red caramel. The sudden poke on her chest though, was another story.
Lying on her right breast, was a small creature looking slightly wet and moving eerily, being something that she thought was probably stuck to her candy and that. Giving her best effort as not to slap the little intruder away, Sandy was bested by her curiosity upon seeing it. It didn't resemble any bug that she knew; if she squinted, and as impossible it seemed outside the influence of drugs, she could see that it actually resembled more a tiny person. More specifically...
-"Dr. Smith?"- she asked mildly, not knowing if she would get any response. To her surprise, the little thing turned to face her, the recognizable features she knew were her dentist's. -What's up with that? He's fun sized!- she asked to herself, becoming even more intrigued by this newest finding. The tiny doctor started waving to her, and it looked as if he was trying to shout at her, though the little she could hear came out as if he were shouting it from kilometers away.
-"Hold on doc, I can't hear anything. Let me try something.."- Sandra reasoned for the sake of their communication. Gently lifting her doctor from her breast with her hand, carefully she placed him on a table next to her seat, among picks and brushes, where she placed her ear near him so she could try to hear him. To their luck, it did, soon after she could hear his voice much clearer, -"Can you hear me now?"-
Not knowing where to start her line of questioning, the first thing Sandra did was asking the doctor what was going on with him. She got an explanation on how a machine made him this small, him getting into her purse and stuck to her lollipop, the same that she was ready to enjoy a few moments ago. -"And here I just thought the wrapper stuck to it.Well.. Sorry about that."- she apologized about putting him in danger of almost becoming part of her treat. -"Don't worry, I got a nice view out of it!"- he answered. -"And what do you mean by that?"- she called on the implications of his statement. -"Err.. I mean, I got a nice and close view of your mouth!"- he replied sheepishly. -"Of course."-
-"Well, you say this is supposed to make your work easier and more precise, didn't you?"- she continued. -"Yes, but I've never tried it before. Besides, I've heard stories of accidents happening like this, dentists getting devoured, and..."- he began again, all but sure where this conversation was headed. -"Rumors you say? That's rubbish, doctor! If it wasn't safe then why would they even tell you to use it? Come on, didn't you say you've already got a nice view? I promise you will be safe."- she tried to convince him of carrying on her examination, partially because she was still very thrilled of this new procedure.
-"You have a point there..."- he thought for a moment. -"Sandra,...
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