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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Action/Adventure · #1373411
You are a tiny life guard working in a huge water park surrounded by giant women.
This choice: You decide to open the park by yourself. What could possibly go wrong?  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

The Gates of Disaster

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You figure you can open the gate no problem. You stroll up to the pin keeping it locked and wrap your arms around it. You pull up with all of your strength but it seems to be stuck. You keep tugging but its no use.

Its now 9:05 and the people are getting impatient. You pump yourself up and attempt to unlock the gate again. Just as you do an impatient teen shakes the gate a bit which dislodges the pin! The door swings open hard and you roll under it at the last minute. Right into the path of the stampeding women...

The crowd starts pushing through but the gate is pretty narrow so they are forced to funnel in through one spot. The teen that shook the gate was the first one through and stepped down crushing you from the waist down. Her foot quickly rises but many more are about to use you as a welcome mat. The next woman crushes the rest of you with her heel. Her daughters then run you over followed by 6 or more girls each carrying presents. By now you are flatter than paper and stuck fast to the floor and the crowed is still big as hell and stomping through the gate. At least a hundred more guests trample you under bare feet, sneakers, flip flops, and even a few smash you under extremely painful high heels. "It can't" STOMP!! "get any" SQUISH!! "worse.." CRUNCH!!! you think to yourself but it does.

The entrance area fills up and the crowed is now forced to stand patiently as people transfer into the park allowing more guests to trickle through the little gate that caused you so much trouble. Instead of brief stomps followed by a second or so of relief women are just standing right on top of you as they wait for the line to budge. One woman finally steps off after almost ten minutes of constant pressure only to be stood on a second later by the next one. after almost an hour most of the crowd is in the park and only a few stragglers run you over as they pass the gate. Your poor little body is plastered and mashed every which way on the floor. Eventually you begin to recover but every once in a small group of people arrive and stomp out what little progress you make.

You have the following choices:

1. You get spotted eventually

2. Discovered by Hot Twins

3. Stuck to someones foot

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