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Chapter #5

Jane gets a message

    by: datonman Author IconMail Icon
"More reports are just coming in from..." The television was on and Jane was too busy to watch it. A pipe attached across on the wall was evident enough to be doing pull ups and Jane didn't seem to want to stop. A sweaty Jane almost completed thirty when she heard something interesting on the news. "scientists who seem baffled to this bizarre situation." Grabbing a towel and patting her exposed curvy, fit abdomen, she listened. "Over 650 men in this state have gained a substantial amount of weight in just hours. The result is alarming..." A news reporter pointed to a large man sitting at a table eating large quantities of food. "This man admits to being skinny just a day ago and now he looks over 400 lbs and yet another example..." Jane frowning and keen on knowing more which could explain the real reason John was overweight, heard a ringing. The phone was answered immediately and responded "Hello?" "Is this Jane Rambolina?" a male voice asked. "Who is this ?" she asked strictly. "Just call me... Max." he said coolly. "Look if you're some guy who wants to ask me out, i think you can get the response by the simple hang up of my phone." But Max intercepted quickly to her action. "Believe me this isn't anything like that. I'm with the maximum forces." Jane felt like she got hit by a brick in the stomach. She then replied "That's impossible...there were almost no survivors from-" "And what is 'almost' Jane? I know of this student that you're interested in John isn't it? A bit round in the middle too huh?" "What are you talking about... why are we talking about him?" she asked. "I"m sure you're no doubt aware what is transpiring at the moment. Men are getting fatter and fatter. This young man is the cure Jane and I'm calling to let you know that we are taking him." "What?! you can't be serious!" "Oh yes and he's actually coming to your place as we speak. My 'people' gave him your place of residence and told him you wanted to speak to him. The trap is set bye bye." he had hung up. A disbelieving Jane then heard a knock on her door. 'No don't John!' She answered the door immediately maybe she could save him. John who looked fatter than the day before came in. "Uh hey..." Jane could tell he was nervous, she only had a crop top on. "John listen..." she began immediately but she was cut off by a surprising explosion which knocked them both out cold.
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