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Alien women have a great influence in making a 20 year old get fat.
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Chapter #4

who is carmella?

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John felt like he was spinning and breathing fast. He was in a void but it was not a black void but rather a flash of bright light which came from...the light shining on the gym's ceiling.

John opened his eyes and Carmella, the busty brunette was looking down at him with glee. "Welcome back we thought we lost you there for a minute."

John tried to get up but it took quite an effort what with his immense bulk becoming a problem. He managed however and looked around. Girls of erotic nature circled around them. "What happened?" he asked a bit weakly.

"You fainted. Apparently you rode the machine at a fast level. That can take a lot of air out of you." Carmella explained.

"Oh right." John tried to get up but two tanned sexy girls helped him to his feet. They each smiled at him.

"Listen i got a question." John finally got his energy level up. "Why aren't there any guys here?"

"Because they all went to Mexico to party and go stupid...that's the short version." replied Carmella with a hint of contempt. The girls began to murmur their own discontent out loud.

"Why didn't you guys go?" John frowned.

"We're actually trying to study for next semester."

"Yeah so am i" replied John and looking a bit nervous. He decided he needed to leave to further avoid anymore embarrassments. "I need to go and lie down."

"Well okay see ya then!" Carmella waved bye and the girls as well in unison.

As soon as John left, carmella's face turned serious. "He is the one." she nodded. "We need a plan to make him even more huge."

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1. what's the plan

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2. John gets too fat

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3. Jane makes it a mission to save John

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