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Chapter #6

Painful Lessons

    by: Aerodeth Author IconMail Icon
No matter how much you hate her, how badly you wanna escape, how desperate you wanna get back home, you were at her mercy. You are in incredible pain from just the squeezes between her toes. Another one of those and you'd be dead! For now, Kagura is your master.

"Y...yes..." you groaned as you gripped your nearly broken ribs in paind, "Yes...I do! Yes I do!"
The grin of Kagura's face disappeared and morphed into somewhat of a serious threatening glare. "Good," she set you back down next to her feet and that little toenail brush, "now suck it up and finish your job! Or a few measly broken ribs will be the LEAST of your worries."

You took a few deep breaths, trying to ignore your aching as you picked up the brush. Just stretching your arms enough to pick up the brush was a hell of a lot of hurting itself. You winced and moaned under your breath as you tried to fight back your tears. But you had no choice. Like Kagura taught you the hard way, the sooner you learn your place, the less painful it'll be for you. Mentally AND physically!

"Urgg... urghh..." sure enough the brush was pretty heavy for someone as tiny as you. And to make a perfect stroke down her toenails without so much as touching the rest of her feet was a challenge. Thankfully, the most time you spent through the hellish choir were on her big toes. The other toes werent as much trouble, but the pain in your ribs made it extremely frustration.

Even Kagura could see your struggling. "Hm," she put her hand to her mouth as her big reddish demonic eyes watched you like a hawk, "you seem to be struggling. Such a shame. If you had learned to be obedient sooner, you'd have been spared a painful lesson. Hopefully, that'll stick in your mind in the future, yes?"
"Y....yes ma'am," you groaned as you fought to keep your arms up as you finished up her last toe!

...FINALLY! The last toe was done. You immediately dropped your brush and started catching your breath. Sadly, you knew it wasnt over yet. You still had her FINGERNAILS to do! Fun, yes? But until then...
"I....I.... finished your toes.... ma'am," you blurted out in the middle of every inhale and exhale.

"Let's see how you did, shall we?" Kagura remarked as she looked over at her newly black painted toenails...

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