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Can your love show the vampire prince the light at the end of his tunnel?
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Chapter #3

Not good bye

    by: Crystalrose557 Author IconMail Icon
When you go to look you see someone who look like someone from a dream. A young man with long silver hair, blood red eyes and moonlight skin. You didn't know if you should be scared or intrigued. You stare at him in silence until he noticed you. "oh no, he saw me! what should I do?!" you thought. He simply smiled at the confusion on your face and came towards you. You try to back up but he grabbed your wrist holding you in place. "Don't be frighten I don't bite....much." he said with a chuckle. Your face turned pale as you realized this young man was a vampire. You try to break free from his grip but he just apply pressure to it. "L..Let m..me g..go p..please?" you managed to make out in your trembling voice. "Now why would I do that?" he said playfully. You cried out your brother's name to save yourself and Kilik came running to see you with the vampire. "Kilik help me!!!" you cried out with tears in your eyes. Kilik looked at the vampire then you. "So your Kilik." said the vampire. "And you must be Duzzell." he replied. "Why does my brother know this monster?" you thought. "Brother, How do you know this vampire?" you asked."You still haven't told her yet didn't you?" he said."Tell me what?!" you said frighten. Kilik took a deep breath, "(you name), in order to save the town one of the vampire princes ask for one thing in return for not attacking the town..you." You had nothing to say, you were dumbfound to think that the entire town would sacrifice you to save themselves. As the anger boil your blood Duzzell sensed the hostility and said" You brother argued to the last second of the town meeting to find some other way than this." You raised your head to look at your dear brother's face to see tears coming from his eyes.
"Its time to go now." Duzzell said. You rushed to your brother and hugged him tightly as he stroked your hair " Good Bye Sis." he said with a forced smile.
" I don't wanna say good bye." you said crying.
Kilik looked at you with teary eyes and said "your right its not good bye its just see you later, okay?"
"O...Okay." you said smiling at your beloved brother, then you looked at Duzzell.
"Come." he said offering his hand to you. You grabbed it as he held you close. You took one last look at your brother before thousands of bats surrounded you and Duzzell. Kilik couldn't do anything but look at you disappeared into the night sky with the prince of vampires.

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