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Just like your family, except fatter!
This choice: and how many drinks have you had recently?"  •  Go Back...
Chapter #6

You Have the Right to Shake It!

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Drinks...I haven't had any alcohol...? Susan thought as she nervously stepped out of her car. Her cheeks were flushed and she was quite embarrassed, even if it was just a misunderstanding. She checked to make all her buttons were fastened and she came out with a plastered smile.

She tucked away her slightly sweaty hands into her tight pockets, she wanted to act casual but not to casual.

"Ma'am do you recall when you last had a drink?" The officer surveyed Susan's body top to bottom as he inquired, he eyed her chest for a few shameless seconds.

"Uhh, just some wine this morning. Nothing else." Susan's squeak was barely audible

"You mean, 'nothing else officer'. Right?"

"Yes, sorry." Susan was slightly annoyed but even more scared, "officer." she added. She brushed the loose hair out of her face and tried to smile, her palms were even more sweaty. The officer continued to circle her like a shark. She stood as still as possilbe as his tall figure rounded her over and over.

"Hmm..." The officer muttered, he had stopped behind Susan and was very obviously, very awkwardly 'checking out' her rear end!

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1. Susan said something.

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2. Susan ignored it.

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