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Rated: XGC · Interactive · Fantasy · #1152495

You are shrunk at your friend who is a girl's house.

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Chapter #4

Dana doesn’t feel you and stands up

    by: Comrade Banana Author IconMail Icon
You wiggle and try to do anything to get Dana to notice you, but it has no effect. As Dana begins to stand up, the pressure of her toe quickly rises. The pleasant sensation of being under her soft toe is replaced with pain and fear as its crushing weight bears down on you. You try to wiggle, but her toe is forcing your face, arms, and legs into her smelly leather sandal, rendering it impossible to move. You try to scream out, but your head is encased by her toe, and it’s impossible for Dana to hear you.

As Dana finishes standing up, she has no clue that she is torturing her friend, she doesn’t even know he’s beneath her toe. You’re barely able to breathe and maintain consciousness. Suddenly, you feel her sandal lurch into the air, and you realize she has started walking. You don’t have time to panic as her foot comes crashing down. The pressure of her toe increases tremendously as she puts all of her weight on it to take her next step. All the air is forced from your lungs, and you feel your ribs and legs starting to crack. Her foot rises for the next step, but you’re too weakened to move or scream. Her foot hits the ground again, and the last thing you feel is her toe cracking and crunching your bones.

Dana continues walking, completely unaware that her friend is now a bloody splat on the bottom of her toe.
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