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Chapter #5

Drew could communicate telepathically with Jared

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When Drew got home from soccer, he had supper and he took a shower. Once he got into his bedroom and he closed the door, he got his school books out and he started on his homework, when he started getting a faint vision. He started to see Jared before him, no matter where he looked!

"Oh, wow! I see Jared, sitting at his desk. He's typing on his laptop. Oh... I can see what he's doing. Now he's working on his math homework. We got the same assignment. Oh no! He got a question wrong. I need to tell him!" Drew thought to himself when Drew opened his mouth and started to whisper something.

Meanwhile, a mile away from Drew's house, Jared was working on his homework when suddenly, he heard a familiar voice ringing in his ears.

"Your answer for question 2 is wrong, bro. The correct answer is A, not B." Drew whispered.

Jared looked up.

"Huh? Drew?"

Jared looked around the room. He was all alone. Then he looked at his cell phone. Nobody had called him.

"I was imagining things."

"Hey! You need to correct your answer to question 2 in your homework, bro!" Drew's voice spoke up again.

Jared perked up.

"Drew? Where are you?" he shouted.

"I'm communicating to you telepathically! Isn't this cool? I can see what you're doing. You need to fix your homework!" Drew said.

Jared took his pencil and he changed his answer to the question that Drew was referring to.

"Good job! Now you got the correct answer, bro!" Drew's voice spoke.

"Whoa! You can talk to me from a distance? Without using your cell phone? That's crazy!" Jared sighed.

"Yeah! I can talk to you whenever I want!" Drew assured his friend. "I think I can do other things to you as well!"

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