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Rated: ASR · In & Out · Reviewing · #1592091
Submit your poetry that doesn't quite fit in the mainstream.


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Posted By: Mark C ~ 9 years on WDC! Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: This poem rhymes but don't let that put you off. It's rather quirky and surreal. Hope you enjoy it.

Poetry		Item Posted: Variation  Open in new Window.   (E)
Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Dark
Description: A rather surreal poem about the desire for change. Originally a contest entry.
Posted By: AliceNgoreland Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: Please help refine this.

Poetry		Item Posted: Spinning Stories  Open in new Window.   (ASR)
Genre(s): Fantasy :: Writing
Description: woolgathering, sheep and writing
Posted By: Bishop Black Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: This is the first poem I've ever let others read. I find it to be a dark and mystical work.

Poetry		Item Posted: The Day Lucy Fell  Open in new Window.   (E)
Genre(s): Writing
Description: A very amatuer stab at attempting to write poetry.
Posted By: Bishop Black Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: I dedicate this poem to missing and exploited children everywhere. Let the world not rest until the last of them are home.

Other		Item Posted: To the Children  Open in new Window.   (E)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Inspirational :: Dark
Description: A poem about the lost.
Posted By: ~`~Lincoln Girl~`~ Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: new poem! needs great review!

Poetry		Item Posted: A new sort of family.  Open in new Window.   (13+)
Genre(s): Teen :: Emotional :: Inspirational
Description: A poem of the last few months of my life
Posted By: sandesh Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: It just flashed while waiting for the traffic light to turn green

Poetry		Item Posted: Meditation at the crossroad  Open in new Window.   (13+)
Genre(s): Spiritual :: Experience
Description: This happened to me the other day at the traffic while waiting for the light to turn green
Posted By: PoeticFox Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: thank you in advance for reading this peice

Poetry		Item Posted: To Die For Love  Open in new Window.   (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: A tale of an western Romeo And Juliet
Posted By: Taylor Peppers Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: A super quick read. Let me know what it means to you.

Poetry		Item Posted: Recovery  Open in new Window.   (13+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Relationship :: Romance/Love
Description: Inspired by my best friend's break up.
Posted By: Jazz Smith Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: A cold love story

Poetry		Item Posted: Bitter Frost  Open in new Window.   (E)
Genre(s): Relationship :: Dark :: Emotional
Description: Lonliness and comfort
Posted By: Billy Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: I hope you enjoy!

Poetry		Item Posted: Lamplight Sonnet  Open in new Window.   (E)
Genre(s): Spiritual :: Philosophy
Description: A poem about finding wisdom through insight and knowledge.
Posted By: 💟Crissy~Hijacked Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: BiPolar, Schizophrenic self-talk. I'd like to know your impression.

Poetry		Item Posted: Mirror, Mirror  Open in new Window.   (18+)
Genre(s): Psychology :: Personal :: Death
Description: One personality speaks to another.
Posted By: Daniel Harris Blacke Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: A taste of my poetry I hope your palette can bare. For a rate and review I would be indebted to you,and I would greatly appreciate any suggestions as to which genre(s) it should be placed in.

Poetry		Item Posted: Crypt of Flesh  Open in new Window.   (13+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Death :: Cultural
Description: If a foetus could talk...
Posted By: Litleozy Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: Hey, need some help with this one, still not quite feeling right.

Poetry		Item Posted: Gingerlilly  Open in new Window.   (E)
Genre(s): Personal :: Arts :: Thriller/Suspense
Description: The modern condition-er
Posted By: Aurora Marie Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: PLEASE be brutally honest. I am trying to deversify my poetry and think outside the box. I also want to become a better poet and i realize the only way to do that is to fail quite a few times and be rejected even more. ideas would be greatly welcomed.

Poetry		Item Posted: Forever yours...Your never mine  Open in new Window.   (ASR)
Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Tragedy
Description: a classic cliche, of the stupid girl who fell had for a boy who didnt care.
Posted By: very thankful Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: This is my first attempt at a Trijan Refrain. I would love a review. It's based on a nightmare I had.

Poetry		Item Posted: The Storms  Open in new Window.   (13+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Drama :: Relationship
Description: A poem based on a nightmare.
Posted By: very thankful Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: This is my first attempt at a Rondelet. I would love a review. Thanks!

Poetry		Item Posted: Will You Move Heaven  Open in new Window.   (13+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Emotional :: Experience
Description: My first attempt at a Rondelet.
Posted By: very thankful Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: This is my first attempt at a Haiku. I would love a review. Thanks!

Poetry		Item Posted: Obsession  Open in new Window.   (13+)
Genre(s): Experience :: Relationship :: Emotional
Description: My first attempt at a Senyru.
Posted By: BIG BAD WOLF Feeling Thankful Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: A tribute to those in the military. Done in a free/ryming manner

Poetry		Item Posted: Oh the Cost  Open in new Window.   (13+)
Genre(s): Military :: Spiritual :: Tribute
Description: This is about the price any soldier could pay. Please be respectful when you r/r it.
Posted By: BIG BAD WOLF Feeling Thankful Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: A tribute to grandmothers, in free verse.

Poetry		Item Posted: Grandmothers  Open in new Window.   (E)
Genre(s): Family :: Tribute :: Spiritual
Description: This is for every True Grandmother out there. Everyone else, be respectful when you r/r it
Posted By: BIG BAD WOLF Feeling Thankful Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: Self-Explanatory. Done in a rhyming scheem of sorts.

Poetry		Item Posted: A Tribute to a Friend  Open in new Window.   (13+)
Genre(s): Spiritual :: Friendship :: Tribute
Description: This is a tribute to a friend by the name of Kathy Smile. I miss you.
Posted By: iggyg85 Author IconMail Icon
Post Body: This one does make sense more than some of mine, but it is the one I am currently seeking help and reviews on. It's actually a series of poems.

Poetry		Item Posted: Angels of Hell: Tales of the Horsemen  Open in new Window.   (18+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Supernatural :: Thriller/Suspense
Description: Follow in this epic, poetic tale of trials of the four horsemen and those they affect.

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