WhataHiatus, Tehuti, Athena Marie, Skyhawk, I want to thank you all for the great answers to my question as to what turns you off when reading erotica.
I suppose I should add my own answer to the mix
What turns me off are things happening physically that are plain silly. I read one story in which the guy's penis was whipping in and out of various female orifices so fast that I was sure the poor guy would end up with penis 'whiplash'.
Simply said, whatever makes me stop reading and say to myself 'that's utterly impossible' is what turns me off.
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