Kari, You're story thing *the Child* Is it a novel? A short story?
Anyway, it's really great! You did a fabulous job on it. The whole "drenched in blood" thing was a bit creepy at first, but it really added emphasis in the story.
DEFINITLEY continue! Keep up the good work, child!
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