I'm not really sure what to tell you without ruining it, and it really has no plot yet. :x Which really sucks cause I have 5 full length pages written already, hopefully more by tomorrow morning.
Okay, it begans the story with a girl named Xyla.---------(stuff I can't say....) Then she finds this baby and raises him as her own child even though Xyla is like only 16 or something. Then it goes on using the child as the main character, it's about his life and what he goes through. Okay, so really bad for a preview. But like I said I don't have much of a plot yet.
Sorry it's not better. I have a feeling it's not going to be very good. It's really dragging so far.
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