I suggested the Plot Plinko because you mentioned you didn't have a plan for the story, and obviously Plinkos help on that. I'd have wanted to know how Will would've been brought back if the option to "Go Home" was chosen - most likely he'd find them at school, where they'd disrupt his usual routine, but then it'd be a clash between the recently-reacquainted group and the usual suspects, of which at least two of them were also in the minigolf (Caleb and Keith).
Interesting to see a sole branch with six chapters, though, as your first plan. I would've thought you'd gone for two chapters per choice to have a small buffer, especially when one isn't working as intended.
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