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Jan 9, 2025 at 1:02am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Warehouse Warriors
So with "A Great Big StephonyOpen in new Window. I might leave things here for a bit. At the very least I'll give it a few days before resuming because I'm also unsure of which direction to go.

Hopefully what's been written is interesting and relatively coherent. Tying Will's new relationship to Marc and Hannah's in a sense just sort of came about in a way where it seemed like it made sense to at least me. I don't know or remember if it's ever gone into how they got together so it just being a matter of instant chemistry feels natural. Their relationship being steamy has been a constant thing too and I thought it made sense to contrast it with Will and Elsie who aren't coming at it with the same confidence you'd expect from two popular, attractive athletes. With Hannah, I don't think her personality has ever been delved into much beyond the rivalry with Anita/Stephanie and her and Marc being hot and heavy; I think she's a bit of a party girl too. So hopefully this adds another new wrinkle showing a bit playfulness and devilishness, a bit of a libertine but also someone with empathy. Will "helped" her a bit so she's returning the favor and maybe having Stephanie's brain would make her a little more receptive to giving him a quick bit of advice since Stephanie knows him (but where Stephanie zigs left, she'll zig right).
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