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Oct 16, 2024 at 4:27pm
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Diary Entrys of a slightly sexist boy as he falls in love
I'm writing a story called abby lane https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/2328702-Abby-Lane
as the title suggests it's about a slightly sexist boy growing up in the 60s as he falls in love with his best friend Abagail
I'd just like some people to read through it and let me know what they think and what I can do to improve
it's about 22 pages and I think it is worth every word
I'm also willing to critique anybody who helps me out!
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