Looks very promising to me. Reminds me of "A Laughing Goddess Rhamnusia" [18+]. You can return to assignment One and do more What-ifs to help you further. What if the wife, what if the husband, what if the sister-in-law PI, what if the LA guy? Then flesh out a few you like the best. Go crazy, go all the way. Make cross-connections (The LA guy is the secret boyfriend of the sister-in-law, so the sister-in-law PI has hidden motives) etc. But the plan looks like something good.
The following section applies to this forum item as a whole,
not this individual post.
Any feedback sent through it will go to the forum's
owner, Brandiwynš¶.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/forums/message_id/3686938
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.14 seconds at 11:10pm on Nov 27, 2024 via server WEBX2.