You know, truefully I am not sure anymore. I had her want as wanting to be free. She kills her ole man (so she thinks) and now she wants to stay free. But I am not sure that should be it. I am going to redo her arc and see if I can come up with something better. In a nut shell:
1. she is a physically and emotionally abused wife
2. During one of her beatings she snaps and stabs him
3. she flees to CA and meets a guy who has a mysterious past
4. Her sister-in-law, a PI, finds her and her brother, who is the husband starts stalking her.
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